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The pretty little lies of life
That flutter in my ears
You tell me you can take away my strife
You wisper and flutter untill your all i hear
I want so much to believe the deciet
Those pretty little lies, they flutter and they fly
Trusting them is a mistake that i cannot repeat
And yet i sit and wonder why, why the truth makes me cry
Flattery compliments that slowly burn, always wanting something in return
These pretty little lies of life, they always look so very nice.
Disguised as inviting and warm, inside thier really shackles and thorns.
So, ignore the pretty lies of life
they never take away your strife
so turn the music up real loud
and try your best to tune them out
That flutter in my ears
You tell me you can take away my strife
You wisper and flutter untill your all i hear
I want so much to believe the deciet
Those pretty little lies, they flutter and they fly
Trusting them is a mistake that i cannot repeat
And yet i sit and wonder why, why the truth makes me cry
Flattery compliments that slowly burn, always wanting something in return
These pretty little lies of life, they always look so very nice.
Disguised as inviting and warm, inside thier really shackles and thorns.
So, ignore the pretty lies of life
they never take away your strife
so turn the music up real loud
and try your best to tune them out
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The pretty little lies can tell you lots about the people telling them.
As to the poem: structure-wise you could improve upon the parallel structure i sense you were trying to create by putting in another quatrain after the tercet. talk about why you can't trust them even though you want to (reflecting the second stanza).
As to the poem: structure-wise you could improve upon the parallel structure i sense you were trying to create by putting in another quatrain after the tercet. talk about why you can't trust them even though you want to (reflecting the second stanza).